Reconstructed Analysis of Translation & Structural Decisions
This journal documents translation and structural decisions made in creating the Literal–Literary Structured Edition of Ephesians. It records Greek text analysis, alternative renderings, lexical rationale, structural formatting, and theological coherence considerations based on Tim Mackie's translation for The BibleProject.
Base Text NA28/UBS5 Greek (critical text)
This translation employs a literal–literary style: close to Greek wording while surfacing Hebraic cadence (triads, parallelism, creed/doxology). This is not a paraphrase or commentary but a reconstruction of how the text would have been heard by its earliest audience.
Nature of This Resource:
This journal is a retrospective educational analysis created to help students and teachers understand translation methodology. It is not official documentation from the translator, but rather:
Confidence Levels: Decisions are marked with confidence indicators where applicable:
High confidence: Observable pattern used consistently (e.g., "Messiah" for Χριστός)
Medium confidence: Lexical choice with clear rationale from context
Lower confidence: Ambiguous cases with multiple valid options
The layout itself teaches. Structure replaces many footnotes—readers see discourse relationships visually before reading commentary.
Theme: Blessing, Mystery, and Cosmic Christ
Key Structures: Greeting (1-2), Great Blessing/Berakah (3-14), Prayer-Report (15-23)
Status: ✓ Complete — All 23 verses documented
📐 Structural Overview: The blessing follows Hebraic berakah pattern with Trinitarian movement: Father's election (3-6), Son's redemption (7-12), Spirit's sealing (13-14). Each concludes with "praise of his glory." The prayer (15-23) describes resurrection power and cosmic lordship, climaxing in the church as Christ's body.
Structural Significance: One continuous 202-word Greek sentence—among the longest in the NT. Follows Hebraic berakah pattern with Trinitarian structure: Father (3-6), Son (7-12), Spirit (13-14). Three parallel refrains: "praise of his glory" (vv. 6, 12, 14). This is formatted as a major structural anchor with visual prominence.
| Usage | Context | Meaning |
|---|---|---|
| 1:3 | Blessing location | Spiritual realm where believers are blessed |
| 1:20 | Christ's session | Throne room of cosmic authority |
| 2:6 | Believers seated | Current spiritual position in Christ |
| 3:10 | Cosmic witness | Realm of angelic powers observing church |
| 6:12 | Spiritual warfare | Domain of hostile spiritual forces |
| Rendering | Strength | Weakness |
|---|---|---|
| "freely given" | Natural English | Flattens wordplay; loses χάρις connection |
| "bestowed" | Formal register matches context | Generic; could apply to any gift |
| "graced" (verb) | Preserves cognate accusative; grace as action | Slightly awkward in English |
| Reference | Context | Content of Mystery |
|---|---|---|
| 1:9 | Made known to us | God's will to unite all things in Christ |
| 3:3-4 | By revelation | Insight into the mystery of Christ |
| 3:9 | Hidden from ages | God's plan for multi-ethnic church |
| 5:32 | Marriage metaphor | Christ and church union |
| 6:19 | Paul's request | The mystery of the gospel |
| Rendering | Commercial Context | Theological Implication |
|---|---|---|
| "pledge" | Promise of full payment | Spirit guarantees future inheritance |
| "down payment" | First installment binding contract | Spirit is partial now, fullness later |
| "first installment" | Initial payment of series | Current Spirit-experience as preview |
| "guarantee" | Security for transaction | Spirit secures eschatological promise |
| Greek Term | Nuance | Usage |
|---|---|---|
| ἐνέργεια | Working, effective operation | Energy in action, active force |
| κράτος | Might, dominion, sovereign power | Ruling strength, governmental force |
| ἰσχύς | Strength, ability, force | Raw power, capability |
Theme: From Death to Life; Jew-Gentile Reconciliation
Key Structures: Dead in sins (1-3), Made alive in Christ (4-10), Far/Near reconciliation (11-18), Temple metaphor (19-22)
Status: ✓ Complete — Major decisions documented
| Verb | Action | Theological Significance |
|---|---|---|
| συνεζωοποίησεν | made alive together with | Resurrection participation (σύν-compound) |
| συνήγειρεν | raised up together | Co-resurrection with Christ |
| συνεκάθισεν | seated together | Co-enthronement in heavenlies |
2:14-16 forms a dense theological statement about reconciliation:
| Rendering | Lexical Sense | Theological Implication |
|---|---|---|
| "abolished" | Rendered inoperative, nullified | Torah's covenant function ended |
| "set aside" | Put away, removed from use | Torah no longer boundary marker |
| "nullified" | Made void, ineffective | Torah's divisive power broken |
Theme: Mystery Revealed; Paul's Ministry; Cosmic Wisdom
Key Structures: Paul's commission (1-7), Mystery content (8-13), Prayer for love (14-19), Doxology anchor (20-21)
Status: ✓ Complete — Major decisions documented
| Greek Term | Literal | Meaning |
|---|---|---|
| συγκληρονόμα | co-heirs | Equal inheritance rights with Israel |
| σύσσωμα | co-body | One body, not separate entity (unique NT word) |
| συμμέτοχα | co-partakers | Joint participation in promises |
| Interpretation | Support | Challenge |
|---|---|---|
| Dimensions of God's love | Context emphasizes love (v. 17, 19) | No explicit object in v. 18 |
| Dimensions of mystery | Follows mystery discourse (vv. 1-13) | Shift from mystery to love seems abrupt |
| Cosmic scope of salvation | Matches cosmic language throughout | Generic interpretation |
Theme: Unity and Maturity in the Body
Key Structures: Seven unities (1-6), Gifts for maturity (7-16), Old/new humanity contrast (17-24), Practical holiness (25-32)
Status: ✓ Complete — Major decisions documented
| Greek Term | Translation | Nuance |
|---|---|---|
| ταπεινοφροσύνη | humility | Lowliness of mind (counter-cultural in Greco-Roman world) |
| πραΰτης | gentleness | Meekness, not harshness (strength under control) |
| μακροθυμία | patience | Long-suffering, slow to anger (relational endurance) |
| ἀνεχόμενοι ἀλλήλων ἐν ἀγάπῃ | bearing with one another in love | Tolerating imperfections (present middle participle = mutual action) |
| View | Referent | Support |
|---|---|---|
| Incarnation | Coming to earth | Genitive = "lower regions, namely earth" |
| Death/Hades | Realm of dead | Comparative κατώτερα = "lower than earth" |
| Humiliation | Cross/burial | Follows Phil 2:6-11 pattern |
| Role | Function | Note |
|---|---|---|
| ἀπόστολοι | Apostles | Sent ones, foundational (2:20; 3:5) |
| προφῆται | Prophets | Spirit-inspired speakers, also foundational |
| εὐαγγελισταί | Evangelists | Gospel proclaimers (only here, Acts 21:8, 2 Tim 4:5) |
| ποιμένας καὶ διδασκάλους | Shepherds and teachers | One article governs both = one office with dual function |
Verses 25-32 apply old/new humanity contrast through specific ethical instructions. Each builds on "Therefore" (Διό) from v. 25, connecting to transformation just described. Pattern: negative prohibition + positive command.
Theme: Walk in Love and Light; Household Codes
Key Structures: Imitate God (1-2), Walk in light (3-14), Spirit-filled living (15-21), Household instructions (22-33)
Status: ✓ Complete — Major decisions documented
| Meaning | Support | Application |
|---|---|---|
| "Authority over" | Some Greek usage, hierarchical structure | Husband exercises leadership |
| "Source/origin" | Gen 2:21-23 (Eve from Adam), some Greek usage | Husband as origin (woman from man) |
| "Preeminence" | Col 1:18; 2:10 (Christ supreme) | Husband as foremost, not dominating |
Theme: Household Order, Spiritual Warfare, Closing
Key Structures: Children/fathers, slaves/masters (1-9), Armor of God (10-20), Final greetings (21-24)
Status: ✓ Complete — Major decisions documented
| Greek Term | Translation | Meaning |
|---|---|---|
| αἱ ἀρχαί | the rulers | Spiritual authorities/principalities |
| αἱ ἐξουσίαι | the authorities | Powers with delegated authority |
| οἱ κοσμοκράτορες τοῦ σκότους | cosmic-powers of this darkness | World-rulers (κόσμος + κράτος) of darkness-realm |
| τὰ πνευματικὰ τῆς πονηρίας | spiritual forces of evil | Spirit-beings characterized by wickedness |
| Armor Piece | Greek Term | Spiritual Reality |
|---|---|---|
| Belt | περιζωσάμενοι... ἀλήθειᾳ | Truth (girding loins = readiness, holding garments) |
| Breastplate | θώρακα τῆς δικαιοσύνης | Justice/righteousness (protects vital organs) |
| Shoes | ὑποδησάμενοι... ἑτοιμασίᾳ τοῦ εὐαγγελίου | Readiness of good-news of peace (mobility) |
| Shield | θυρεὸν τῆς πίστεως | Faith (large rectangular shield, extinguishes flaming arrows) |
| Helmet | περικεφαλαίαν τοῦ σωτηρίου | Salvation (protects head/mind) |
| Sword | μάχαιραν τοῦ πνεύματος, ὅ ἐστιν ῥῆμα θεοῦ | Word of God (offensive weapon; ῥῆμα = spoken word) |
| Interpretation | Support | Implication |
|---|---|---|
| Modifies "love" | Proximity to "loving" | Incorruptible/undying love for Christ |
| Modifies "grace" | Grace as eternal reality | Grace in the realm of immortality |
| Modifies "Lord" | Christ's immortality | Love directed to immortal Christ |